
"You're
space plan isn't gonna explode, right? You're gonna return safely, right?"
space plan isn't gonna explode, right? You're gonna return safely, right?"
"Don't worry Neil, daddy's going to be fine. Stop worrying and go to sleep. Good night."
"Good night."
Alan turned of the lights and went to his bedroom, however, he couldn't sleep.
Tomorrow was probably the most important day in his life; he was going to space! That enormous pressure and nervousness kept him up until 2 in the morning, when he forced himself to get some sleep.
Tomorrow was probably the most important day in his life; he was going to space! That enormous pressure and nervousness kept him up until 2 in the morning, when he forced himself to get some sleep.

It was a very emotional goodbye. Everyone was crying and hugging each other. Nevertheless, Alan knew he had a job to do. He had to part with his family. Just as they were about to separate, Neil asked, "dad, you're gonna return home, right? It's safe. right?"
"Don't worry Neil. I promise you I'll come back safely," Alan replied, hoping it was true.

"...4, 3, 2, 1. Lift off!" Even with the deafening rockets, Alan could hear the public screaming and celebrating American history. Also, he could hear his family praying for his safety. In a few seconds, they escaped the Earth's atmosphere, and they were in space! The entire crew and mission control celebrated. But in the next few seconds, everything changed. The pilot died. Immediately, mission control was alerted, and didn't know what to do. They had a gigantic problem on their hands.
Are they gonna die? Will they return? What's gonna happen? These questions raced through the minds of the public, but also the astronauts themselves. They were worried. Temporarily, they were told to wait for mission control to think of a solution. Meanwhile, the flight director became the pilot. After 5 minutes (which felt like 5 years to them), mission control called back. They had a plan.
In the following, there are three clickable links. Each will take you to a different ending. Read each ending, and comment below which you thought was the best ending. Choose wisely.
I guess your writing is Science Fiction. Great job!, you were very creative in writing the story.
ReplyDeleteNext time, as you did on your older postings, please be sure to include some pictures on your blog.
I'll put some pictures on it now :)
Deletegood good
ReplyDeleteHey I read your story!
ReplyDeleteWell I think it was really creative....
Good Job
Oh Jun I like ending one the best because I like when people die because its just a book, hopefully. When you know people die in a book you know its not reality and it just makes the book more exciting. I hope no one died in real life :).
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